Can somebody fix this paragraph? please be very picky.?

One of the things I noticed while entering Wal-Mart, located on Ford Road Street in Dearborn, was that most of the items, especially in the juice and kitchen accessories aisles, were extremely disorganized. In addition to the organizational problems, the cashiers strayed from jobs and deliberately disrespected customers. As a manager, changes must occur in the stocking of items on shelves and customer service. Workers must come to work energetic and ready to achieve any task. Moreover, when dealing with shoppers, clerks should give full respect by showing eye contact and handling buyers in a polite manner.